First Page Friday #26: Cozy Mystery

Apparently it’s reblog Friday around here! First Page Fridays are a great series over at Ellen Brock’s blog, where she offers editorial critique on a first page. Here’s where you come in: FPF (can I call it that?) needs more readers and more comments to help out the writers who are putting their work out there for critique. If you’re a reader or a writer, stop by and share your insights!

I assume normal rules of courtesy and constructive criticism apply. 🙂

Ellen Brock

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About First Page Friday

First Page Friday is a blog series where I provide a free edit and critique of the first 500 words of an unpublished novel. Read the excerpt without my notes first and leave your vote in the poll. Afterward, feel free to leave a comment for the author. Feedback is always helpful!

Cozy Mystery First 500 – HL Carpenter

It wasn’t the food.

Exactly one week after Jo Fernley’s death…

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About Kate Sparkes

Kate Sparkes was born in Hamilton, Ontario, but now resides in Newfoundland, where she tries not to talk too much about the dragons she sees in the fog. She lives with a Mountie, two kids who take turns playing Jeckyll and Hyde, two cats, an intentional boxer and an accidental chihuahua. She's the author of the bestselling Bound Trilogy (mature YA Fantasy). www.katesparkes.com View all posts by Kate Sparkes

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